The Word doc attachment contains updated comments on for the Bay Area to Central Valley High-Speed Train Program EIR/EIS. I have incorporated most of Robert’s suggested edits. There is also an additional paragraph regarding Sacramento service. I also attempted to clarify the issues of headways and transfers. The due date for coments is Sept 28.
BTW, I did not understand Robert’s comment regarding Union City intermodal station. Under the Altamont alternative, transfers to BART would be made in Fremont, Pleasanton, or Livermore (depending on final design configuration). Pacecho, of course, offers no possible transfers to BART in the East Bay.